poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Breakfast by James Rykelangeli.

Ranger27 Apr 2005

First 2 stanzas are very clever and quite amusing, after that you try to be too clever...let's face it, most people will think you've made a typo when you say 'cresset of the moon'. Or maybe it's just me. Maybe I'm simply retarded.