poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Breakfast by James Rykelangeli.

ChaseValentine27 Apr 2005

No, no. You're right. My fault. My lack of vocabulary. I read "cresset" as meaning to be "crescent" and "champaign" as meaning to be "champagne." I thought you were drinking mimosas or something.

Honestly, I like it more having read it again. But I agree that I think it's maybe trying too hard.