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ReplyTo a comment on A Night By The Shore by Bhaskaryya.

DoubleU21 May 2005

A ghazal is an Urdu poetry form? I assume that here you maintain a traditional form. It's not the repetition that irritates me, but the abridgement. Why not 'underneath'? And why not 'underneath the moon' as a seperate line?