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ReplyTo a comment on Castle in the Clouds by TLRufener.

TLRufener19 Sep 2005

Looking at shapes in the clouds is most commonly thought of as a childs' past-time. I switched to rhyme at the half-way mark because I wanted to show the adult reverting to a child. The ending is the child reverting back to the adult, realizing that there are things that must be done before a vacation is due.