ALChemy13 Oct 2005

It still comes off as love between you and something (city or woman or whatever) and the bullet wounds and other more subtle things imply war even if it's some kind of metaphor. You humanized a city but left pretty much no clue to us geographically challenged that it was a city you were talking to.
Unless different interpretations is what your going for it's not necessarily a good thing.
I still like its melodic qualities.