richa15 Nov 2005

If you give the instance you should not have to state the theme, it should be obvious.

Pushing too hard is not the best word choice to describe letting a fire get out of control.

Put 'it' back together; the only 'it' in this poem is the fire.

Strong glue to fix something that is burnt is unapt.

I like the rest of it though. It has a decent spine.