poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus.

LilMsLadyPoet15 Dec 2005

Dawn dances in its white gown
On empty graves dressed in nettles
The wind has come to moan
The sun has (risen) to fall
And like the crown of winter's queen
All that lives
is all that's green.
(This is awesome, but to me the rest does not have the same high quality of flavor...this was rich, the rest was flat, comparitively.) 9 on this part alone, minus the spelling errors.