poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971.

vulcan7 Sep 2002

"I only love"sounds better.No direct hint to the thoughtless deed.maybe intentional?It's good and could be better if your tone be more offensive and sharp towards those who have commited the deed the You only loved.I'll read it again and will give a better grade if you arrange it once more.but in its present form 5