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Niphredil29 Jan 2006

Thank you. I always read 'finally' as a two-syllable word... perhaps that's stretching the meter a bit.
Perhaps,
'At last the time had come, they knew, when each among them should'
would be better?

Sorry for the punchline wreaking havoc, guys, but this was written a little tongue-in-cheek and I couldn't resist. :-)