LilMsLadyPoet1 Mar 2006

This is so freaking cool! What a delight! I am so tempted to go read what others wrote before I post, but I won't. I have no clear understanding what this is about...and I don't think I want one! It could be about so many wonderful things...and so I say...it could use a tweak here or there...but not too many, or it might lose its depth and multi-meaning layers. I have reread this 3 times, and will put it in my favorites to reread again. It is just magical. And, I think, to adults and children alike,it will mean so many different things.I like all the things that may be tucked in the nooks and crannies of this piece. (Like little Spider's webs tucked into the cracks and crevices)
That said, I don't think it would hurt to fill in with a word here or there, in closer proximity to complete sentences.