LilMsLadyPoet3 Mar 2006
This is much more pulled together than the other one! (good editing! Hard to do, sometimes!)
It is still alittle awkward right there...needs a smoother transition...maybe something like>?
So I left her to stamp and hurl lettuces
And the fairies danced
To cast a spell at me
I dodged and she slept for a hundred years