poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Devil's Carnival by Ranger.

Niphredil12 Mar 2006

Wow. I'm honored...

It really is a good job, though. You've got on the one hand, the swiftly moving lines of the carnival action spinning out of control, and on the other hand, the cruelty and brutality implied in "flailing arm", "body blackened", "laughter follows cracks in porcelain". They work together well, creating a overall creepiness reminiscent of the Joker.