poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Morning City by Jack Diamond.

Ranger7 Apr 2006

'lays' (line 18) should be 'lies', I think. I'm very tired right now so I might be wrong. I like this although 3am seemed wrong - either you've stepped back in time or you guys start seriously early. 7am would have worked better, to me at least. Cool last line.