poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on jay by ecargo.

ALChemy13 Apr 2006

The fact that the bird does his bowing so prematurely in the poem(I mean you hardly had time to enjoy him) leads me to think this is a well disguised metaphor for those 2 minute men that women are always talking about. ;D

Are you sure line 4 needs no puntuation?