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Free verse № 142266

jay

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Apr 2006 · 7 comments

The seesaw slide-whistle from the pine pulls me out, white blue blue sky swirl flash audacity of bird bowing, chortling.

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[8] Dovina 13-Apr-06/9:27 AM Reply
They are audacious!
[9] ALChemy 13-Apr-06/12:08 PM Reply
The fact that the bird does his bowing so prematurely in the poem(I mean you hardly had time to enjoy him) leads me to think this is a well disguised metaphor for those 2 minute men that women are always talking about. ;D

Are you sure line 4 needs no puntuation?
[9] ALChemy › ALChemy 13-Apr-06/12:10 PM Reply
-or even "punctuation". Jeez, I can't spell today.
[7] richa 16-Apr-06/2:25 PM Reply
'white blue blue
sky swirl flash audacity
of bird bowing, chortling.'

A couple more articles here please.
[9] Ranger 17-Apr-06/2:10 AM Reply
Great fun to read, the final line is pretty cartoon-y. Plenty to see in only 5 lines; very well written.
[n/a] ecargo 17-Apr-06/1:50 PM Reply
Pulitzer (announced today) for poetry goes to Claudia Emerson for _Late Wife,_ - "Epistolary poems about losing love and finding it again." http://www.nytimes.com/ref/arts/pulitzers2006.html (registration required)

Three poems by Emerson for anyone curious about what Pulitzer Prize winning poetry looks like: http://www.poems.com/threeeme.htm
[n/a] ecargo 17-Apr-06/1:54 PM Reply
Math poem fans: "Gregory K. Pincus, a screenwriter and aspiring children's book author . . . wrote a post on his GottaBook blog (gottabook.blogspot.com) two weeks ago inviting readers to write "Fibs," six-line poems that used a mathematical progression known as the Fibonacci sequence to dictate the number of syllables in each line. Then, last Friday, . . . slashdot.org . . . linked to Mr. Pincus's original post, and suddenly, it seemed, Fibs were sprouting all over the Internet."

Story here: http://www.nytimes.com/2006/04/14/books/14fibo.html?ex=1145419200&en=e0ccb44acd92493d&ei=5087%0A