Edna Sweetlove29 Oct 2006

Well, this poem is very badly written. It also contains poor grammar and syntax. And the primordial slime bit is a bit over the top. I am tempted to give it 0/10 just out of bitchiness but that would be unfair as it holds a kernel of truth in its clumsiness.

So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?