poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Sonnet 3 (Farewell my muse) by Schlinkey.

Ranger27 Nov 2006

I'd cut a few of the commas and replace them with alternative punctuation - purely for presentation. Other than that I enjoyed this, although I rarely like seeing the dummy auxiliary 'do' used, even in a classical style. If it's possible to edit that out, it might be worthwhile.