Dovina10 Dec 2006
Wow, you write a lot of poems! Are you trying to surpass me in poems posted? Lots of luck there, fella. My fear, however, is that you could be younger, and could win fifty years from now.
All right, hereâs the bitter ode from a womanâs tongue: You comment too little! Your comments are fewer than comments received, and this is not only bad etiquette, itâs contrary to the ode âIt is more blessed to give than to receive.â So, get into the process â dialog, debate, comment. Youâll become a better poet.
As for this poem, itâs pretty good. One of you better posts.