poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on On returning to a town where I used to live by Nicholas Jones.

nentwined15 Feb 2007

"I remember the tiny details of the place" is a decent hook (as in, start there), but you need to follow with actual details, or contrast it with something that tells the lie.

You've told me something, vague, and I don't believe you. An extra point for Starbucks, vile corporation that they may be, because I've always wanted to watch Battlestar Galactica, and I could use some coffee.