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Member since 22 May 2001 · 114 poems · 55 favorites

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kaolin i. fire is a conglomeration of desires and ideas that often have trouble breaking free of the daily molasses.
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from the disturbed psyche of self
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FormVotesAverage
Free verse9235.05
Haiku776.22
Lyric805.34
Limerick554.71
Ode504.70
Concrete84.75
Other984.60
Sonnet195.53
Villanelle76.43
Sestina17.00
Pimple67.00
Meta-Ku36.67
Acrostic12.00
Glosa23.00
Programming53.40
Terza Rima17.00
Prose Poem36.33
Senryu47.00
All13435.10

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FormComments
Free verse1042
Haiku113
Lyric90
Limerick23
Ode32
Concrete16
Other96
Sonnet11
Villanelle15
Pimple18
Meta-Ku12
Acrostic1
Glosa3
Programming1
Terza Rima1
Prose Poem6
Senryu8
All1488

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Poems114 by nentwined

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  1. False Memory
    Free verse 1 comment last vote 27 Jan 2025 (9) last comment 23 Jun 2021
    5.19 2 votes
  2. nothing to say
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 25 Apr 2021 (5) last comment 25 Apr 2021
    5.32 3 votes
  3. Game Over
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 25 Apr 2021 (8) last comment 25 Apr 2021
    5.36 3 votes
  4. living stone
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 11 Mar 2021 (8) last comment 11 Mar 2021
    4.91 4 votes
  5. the edge of creation - spoken word
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 25 Apr 2021 (4) last comment 11 Mar 2021
    5.05 2 votes
  6. the product of repetition
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 29 Dec 2020 (8) last comment 30 Dec 2020
    5.12 2 votes
  7. Nadine
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (8) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    5.40 3 votes
  8. these works
    Free verse 0 comments last vote 26 Dec 2020 (8) last comment –
    5.14 2 votes
  9. I'll start
    Free verse 7 comments last vote 26 Dec 2020 (7) last comment 2 Dec 2020
    5.09 2 votes
  10. Where are all the poets?
    Free verse 8 comments last vote 26 Dec 2020 (8) last comment 28 Nov 2020
    5.40 3 votes
  11. time and clocks
    Free verse 1 comment last vote 26 Dec 2020 (9) last comment 28 Apr 2020
    5.17 2 votes
  12. bitrot
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 26 Dec 2020 (8) last comment 26 Dec 2020
    5.40 3 votes
  13. And on and on and on
    Free verse 2 comments last vote 17 Apr 2018 (4) last comment 17 Apr 2018
    5.18 4 votes
  14. There Was Poetry For Them All
    Free verse 1 comment last vote 7 Apr 2015 (9) last comment 7 Apr 2015
    5.19 1 vote
  15. server maintenance
    Free verse 1 comment last vote 14 Sep 2014 (5) last comment 14 Sep 2014
    4.95 2 votes
  16. Max's Poems
    Free verse 8 comments last vote 22 Jun 2012 (10) last comment 25 Sep 2012
    5.00 2 votes
  17. a love haiku -- for darkangel
    Haiku 1 comment last vote 14 Feb 2021 (3) last comment 14 Feb 2021
    5.00 2 votes
  18. tone-deaf or color-blind
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 25 Sep 2011 (9) last comment 25 Sep 2011
    5.19 2 votes
  19. prove me wrong
    Free verse 10 comments last vote 10 Aug 2011 (0) last comment 7 Mar 2009
    5.00 3 votes
  20. 2am and sober in the digital age
    Haiku 8 comments last vote 9 Mar 2009 (8) last comment 7 Mar 2009
    5.30 4 votes
  21. brain cookies
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 7 Mar 2009 (8) last comment 8 Mar 2009
    5.14 2 votes
  22. Magazine Promotion
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 29 Jul 2008 (10) last comment 29 Jul 2008
    5.44 3 votes
  23. Cinematic Indulgence
    Free verse 7 comments last vote 13 Oct 2008 (9) last comment 5 Aug 2008
    5.36 5 votes
  24. in this bus terminal of the future
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 14 Feb 2009 (9) last comment 15 Feb 2009
    5.77 8 votes
  25. Modern Stupidity
    Haiku 1 comment last vote 30 May 2008 (7) last comment 30 May 2008
    5.09 1 vote
  26. look upon my works
    Free verse 1 comment last vote 29 Apr 2008 (7) last comment 26 Apr 2008
    5.05 2 votes
  27. a self-conscious lack of denial
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 13 Mar 2007 (0) last comment 16 Feb 2007
    5.09 4 votes
  28. sleep
    Haiku 8 comments last vote 6 Sep 2008 (10) last comment 31 Jan 2007
    6.11 9 votes
  29. a limerick from kent
    Limerick 7 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 13 Mar 2007
    4.80 8 votes
  30. Today's Spam
    Senryu 16 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.62 14 votes
  31. why?
    Pimple 12 comments last vote 29 Jun 2007 (0) last comment 13 Mar 2007
    5.61 9 votes
  32. fox and hounds
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    5.57 8 votes
  33. The cat who would fly
    Free verse 9 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.40 10 votes
  34. a love not meant to be
    Free verse 6 comments last vote 17 Aug 2008 (2) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    5.91 11 votes
  35. word splatter
    Free verse 9 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    5.78 9 votes
  36. on my hog
    Haiku 6 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    4.90 10 votes
  37. dit da haiku
    Meta-Ku 18 comments last vote 2 Jan 2011 (5) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.10 10 votes
  38. self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep
    Haiku 2 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (5) last comment 5 Sep 2005
    5.81 6 votes
  39. Censor
    Concrete 12 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (6) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.45 10 votes
  40. standing outside the door
    Free verse 6 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (9) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.90 10 votes
  41. knowledge building on knowledge
    Haiku 6 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (6) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    5.88 7 votes
  42. The Sleep Fantastic
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 21 Jul 2008 (8) last comment 21 Jul 2008
    5.91 8 votes
  43. Recognition
    Haiku 35 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.83 25 votes
  44. keep on digging
    Free verse 8 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 21 Dec 2004
    6.32 11 votes
  45. She washed over me
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (9) last comment 19 Sep 2004
    6.08 7 votes
  46. today the world is beauty
    Pimple 13 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (9) last comment 29 Jul 2004
    6.55 11 votes
  47. good bye.
    Pimple 4 comments last vote 25 Feb 2007 (0) last comment 25 Feb 2007
    6.78 14 votes
  48. selfhood, through extrospection
    Free verse 13 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.67 20 votes
  49. forwards
    Free verse 23 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 6 Aug 2005
    6.45 11 votes
  50. clay or mud (hertz donut version)
    Free verse 6 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (7) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.39 9 votes
  51. do androids dream?
    Free verse 14 comments last vote 1 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 18 Jan 2007
    6.91 18 votes
  52. innocent voyeur
    Free verse 17 comments last vote 13 Mar 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.80 13 votes
  53. sum of squares
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 30 Jan 2021 (1) last comment 17 May 2004
    6.74 13 votes
  54. bipolar
    Pimple 8 comments last vote 27 Jan 2021 (1) last comment 25 Feb 2007
    6.82 16 votes
  55. ritual of now intensified
    Free verse 22 comments last vote 5 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 15 Jan 2007
    6.97 13 votes
  56. BreakBeat TimeTravel
    Free verse 22 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 13 Jul 2005
    6.64 11 votes
  57. my hunger has become a hunger for revenge
    Free verse 12 comments last vote 25 Feb 2007 (0) last comment 15 Feb 2007
    6.98 16 votes
  58. paint me a poem (try 2)
    Free verse 17 comments last vote 27 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 16 Dec 2020
    6.89 29 votes
  59. paint me a poem with pictures
    Lyric 25 comments last vote 4 Apr 2007 (0) last comment 6 Sep 2005
    6.76 37 votes
  60. comment-ary
    Haiku 11 comments last vote 23 Mar 2007 (0) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    7.00 30 votes
  61. glimpses
    Free verse 13 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (3) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    6.89 29 votes
  62. glimpse
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (1) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.84 31 votes
  63. angst
    Lyric 6 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    6.91 25 votes
  64. whimsicals
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.81 27 votes
  65. 575
    Haiku 4 comments last vote 4 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 4 Feb 2021
    6.81 27 votes
  66. this meal was knowledge
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.82 24 votes
  67. One Moment to the Other (v3)
    Free verse 14 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (1) last comment 15 May 2006
    6.85 33 votes
  68. this is your poetry
    Other 12 comments last vote 8 Feb 2009 (0) last comment 2 Oct 2003
    7.00 29 votes
  69. on the edge of creation
    Free verse 8 comments last vote 27 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 12 Sep 2005
    6.88 27 votes
  70. playing the scratching game
    Free verse 8 comments last vote 27 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 2 Oct 2003
    6.87 25 votes
  71. sitting at the cliff's edge
    Free verse 16 comments last vote 25 Jun 2007 (3) last comment 26 Aug 2006
    7.00 30 votes
  72. for sue (20030815)
    Free verse 16 comments last vote 27 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 9 Jul 2008
    6.89 28 votes
  73. you will feel
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (1) last comment 25 May 2005
    6.79 25 votes
  74. Iterated Fuck
    Free verse 54 comments last vote 15 Sep 2021 (0) last comment 15 Feb 2021
    6.82 38 votes
  75. with no words to write (v2)
    Free verse 7 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.85 27 votes
  76. One Moment to the Other (v2)
    Free verse 65 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 2 Oct 2003
    6.40 104 votes
  77. one moment to the other
    Free verse 10 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (2) last comment 5 Mar 2005
    6.86 29 votes
  78. what little I know
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (3) last comment 4 Jun 2003
    6.84 23 votes
  79. (e0)(af)(87e0)
    Free verse 18 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.78 21 votes
  80. with no words to write
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.83 26 votes
  81. killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic)
    Villanelle 12 comments last vote 27 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 7 Mar 2006
    6.97 40 votes
  82. killer boredom butterfly (esoteric)
    Villanelle 7 comments last vote 30 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 14 Jan 2006
    6.90 30 votes
  83. fragment
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 30 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 4 Jun 2003
    6.86 24 votes
  84. dream dream dream dream dream
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 30 Nov 2020 (0) last comment 8 Mar 2007
    6.97 31 votes
  85. nothing could
    Free verse 7 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.84 32 votes
  86. can't
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.65 29 votes
  87. always the end to this good night
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 7 Feb 2021
    6.81 27 votes
  88. the room's a'spinnin'
    Haiku 7 comments last vote 7 Jan 2013 (0) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    7.00 29 votes
  89. In Vein
    Free verse 11 comments last vote 15 Oct 2009 (0) last comment 12 Sep 2002
    6.78 24 votes
  90. Thoughts for Later (v3)
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.86 30 votes
  91. you're never alone
    Free verse 23 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 2 Sep 2002
    6.96 45 votes
  92. Sugar Coating
    Free verse 9 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 3 Sep 2005
    6.77 31 votes
  93. A Moment
    Haiku 7 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 20 Jun 2003
    6.82 56 votes
  94. Ode to a Red Trashcan
    Free verse 10 comments last vote 25 Jun 2007 (5) last comment 20 Sep 2002
    6.94 36 votes
  95. Mirage (v2)
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 14 May 2002
    6.94 69 votes
  96. The Secret
    Free verse 10 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 31 Dec 2004
    6.80 70 votes
  97. KAT 2
    Free verse 12 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 31 Dec 2004
    6.95 63 votes
  98. Can You Hear Us Now?
    Free verse 2 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 9 Sep 2001
    6.75 65 votes
  99. Waiting for things to Happen
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 31 Aug 2002
    6.79 33 votes
  100. Instinct
    Free verse 1 comment last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 24 Jul 2001
    6.91 55 votes
  101. Uncertainty
    Free verse 10 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 4 Jan 2005
    6.32 72 votes
  102. Learning Self
    Free verse 5 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 14 Aug 2002
    6.59 75 votes
  103. A Moment in Time
    Free verse 7 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.96 46 votes
  104. Meta
    Free verse 18 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 6 Sep 2005
    6.95 62 votes
  105. Roundabout
    Free verse 3 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (2) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    6.94 63 votes
  106. Sleep does my eyes
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 25 Feb 2007
    6.81 32 votes
  107. Apathy
    Free verse 19 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    6.62 85 votes
  108. mental collides
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 2 Feb 2021 (0) last comment 2 Feb 2021
    6.88 34 votes
  109. Give me a goal
    Free verse 2 comments last vote 7 Feb 2021 (1) last comment 4 Aug 2002
    6.84 31 votes
  110. Every Day in Every Way
    Free verse 6 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 23 Sep 2002
    6.85 60 votes
  111. appropriation
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 18 Jan 2021 (0) last comment 21 Dec 2020
    6.87 31 votes
  112. A New Day (v2)
    Free verse 4 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 11 May 2002
    6.90 31 votes
  113. overwhelmed
    Free verse 6 comments last vote 30 Nov 2020 (0) last comment 11 Jul 2005
    7.00 36 votes
  114. Birth
    Haiku 33 comments last vote 15 Jan 2007 (10) last comment 11 Oct 2003
    6.53 200 votes

Across them: score 6.30 from 2824 votes · mean rank 1828.82 · 1086 comments · last vote 27 Jan 2025 · last comment 23 Jun 2021