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sleep

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 29 Nov 2006 · 7 comments

satin-lidded eyes close to let the mind open, staring deep inside

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7 comments

[9] Dovina 30-Nov-06/9:16 PM Reply
good point
[2] Stephen Robins 1-Dec-06/3:40 PM Reply
What utter nonsense, if you didn't own this site you would not get half the tens you get. That is utter bum sweat.
[n/a] Ranger › Stephen Robins 2-Dec-06/2:12 PM Reply
Weep (Haipoo) by Ranger

Satan's brownly bow'ls
Squeeze to let the bum open
Nothing much appears
[n/a] nentwined › Ranger 2-Dec-06/2:21 PM Reply
Satan's lonely jow'ls
Sag, a calme before the storme
Of concentration
[n/a] Ranger › nentwined 2-Dec-06/4:21 PM Reply
Santa's awful howls
fill the porcelain valley
as red becomes browne
[n/a] nentwined › Stephen Robins 2-Dec-06/2:23 PM Reply
Probably if I didn't own the site, I wouldn't have been the "vitim" of 0-wars and 10-wars, so likely true.
[n/a] nentwined 31-Jan-07/11:17 AM Reply
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