poemranker ::A New Day (v2) by nentwined

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Free verse № 105

A New Day (v2)

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · Edited 23 Apr 2002 · 4 comments

a new day dawn day pearl blue-grey sway gentle sway

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4 comments

[0] anonymous 10-Jun-01/6:01 PM Reply
feel like the repetition should have been continued in the sixth line.
[0] anonymous 16-Jun-01/1:20 PM Reply
I like the sound of this one.
[0] anonymous 4-Apr-02/1:29 PM Reply
drop the last 3 lines.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-May-02/3:20 PM Reply
Great work!