poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Sunset Beach by amanda_dcosta.

amanda_dcosta4 Jun 2007

Thanks D. Yes, spice is a color. Its a shade of brown seen in an artists' catalog of colors.
As for dropping 'the'..... not convincing. Changes the meter of the poem.
Dreamy paradise.... its supposed to leave the reader wanting more, or wondering.