poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Addendum to Engine Braking BY INTRANSIT by sliver.

INTRANSIT23 Dec 2007

Been busy lately, couldn't get round to the ranker.

Obviously not the way I was going, (though I did miss my mark ) there's potential here.

Drop- Then the, as the, hot brakes, until, a sign, fuck it.

condense the jake line and the following line. Make jake a capital OR a corporation.