Addendum to Engine Braking BY INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Dec 2007 · Edited 14 Dec 2007 · 1 comment

Then the air brakes Staining to hold the load As the curve looms Insidious asphalt Dying to kill Hot brakes Nothing but a jake Standing between me and death Until salvation arises A sign Runaway ramp ahead Fuck it The alternative is death

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[8] INTRANSIT 23-Dec-07/10:45 AM Reply

Been busy lately, couldn't get round to the ranker.

Obviously not the way I was going, (though I did miss my mark ) there's potential here.

Drop- Then the, as the, hot brakes, until, a sign, fuck it.

condense the jake line and the following line. Make jake a capital OR a corporation.