<~>16 Sep 2002

to whom did you write this h? who was she to you? it seems to me you have a drea or two left inside; they didn't all float away on the tide. as a poem, this seems laced together, and i want it to be more tightly woven. just tighter in general, since innocence is a huge thing to lose, and i want to feel this deeper in your words, here.