anonymous14 May 2002

first of all, "The lips of your mouth" is a tad redundant, don't you think? I see what you're going for and it's nice... but it just doesn't work. And s3 - if you're trying to elevate and show some sort of awe for the color of her lips, then don't compare it with art that LITTERS the world, for fuck's sake. Compare it to something lovelier than bird feathers, etc....