poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub.

ecargo7 Dec 2002

Wonderful! I think GW offers good advice regarding stopping after "new" in S4--you make your point with "rigidity" and "attack" later. "Clutched core" and the morning-madness kitty attack under the door are excellent. Not sure about the fold/gold/old rhyme--I'd probably drop it. Really like this.