poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on missing time by Bill Z Bub.

Bill Z Bub21 Dec 2002

Thanks. I agree it's a sudden change. I'm definately not finished revising this one, so all comments are welcome. I like the last strophe too much to cut it. Maybe cut or modify the preceding lines... or add a segue?
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