-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.15 Feb 2003
I like the way you've used the planet in your poeme as a metaphor for our own planet: Earth. Are we to just stand about like kidneys whilst our governments destroy thousands of acres of rainforest simply to fuel their own greedy capitalist agendas? I don't think so, buddy.
I'd like to quote, if I may, a section from your poeme that tackles such issues with astounding clarity:
"...two point five billion must live in the stink
that arises when people have no sanitation
and you tell me all this deserves no lamentation."
I'm not some sort of international hero, but I know I'll be doing some lamenting in the coming weeks and months. Will you?
Good Christ, I hope so.