poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig.

horus818 Feb 2003

Which part of this having 18 syllabols didn't you grasp. The 1 or the 8? Don't get me wrong, because i bend the rules everywhere, but it's unacceptable when dealing with haikus. it's the foundation of the structure and when dealing in this arena it's critical.