-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.7 Mar 2003

A good try! But if you won't come to Bangladesh then that's racist. Apart from that, completely ace! I especially enjoyed the following:

(i) Great use of random line breaks and indentation to make the piece seem more profound!

(ii) Great use of lower case letters for the entire piece to make it look minimalist and deliberately understated!

(iii) Excellent reminiscing about how you both got sloppy drunk one night; those were the days - carefree, young and free-spirited, and carefree, and free, and free, and young. What memories. What happiness. What originalty.

(iv) Frankingstein is the name of the MONSTER. NOT the doctor who created him. It's a common misconception, and one you ought to consider before handing in your application for frozen justification.