Mr Pig (again)12 Apr 2003

Vilanelles would have to be French there so bloody complicated in my opinion. I am inexperienced with this genre of writing but know the basic laws to them. The subject matter is too teen angst but this may make a good lyric. I would have liked to have seen 'broken hearts DONT mend, it would have obliterated the obvious cliche. However my darling don't despair all this needs is a few drafts and touches of creative glitter and originality and you'll have it sparkling like the star you are.

Thank you so very much for your time in commenting on my work, I love you all the same on this site, it has been my pleasure meeting you.

Goodbye. 6