poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub.

god'swife18 Apr 2003

Terrific flow at the beginning. Try to stay with it. Great images; thistle works well I think, for all the obvious reasons. Your going to be a great writer some day, some day soon.

Come to California
I can't see your brown eyes from here.
Mend my sorrow.