poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Lost love by Mikius.

god'swife29 Apr 2003

So...

The structure is good,

but

you
are
not
saying
anything
really.
Where
are
the
specifics.

Somewhere????? Tell exactly where.
'I loved her'? How???? Tell me what you did hold her hand.... walk her dog..... read to her grandmother..... lick her pussy......
I mean, come on, what's your story????

'she left me alone with my thoughts' so what?
what the fuck where you thinking? That's what I want to know. I can't think your thoughts, show them to me.

"I never meant to hurt her" Hoooooooowwwwwww did you hurt her? Scare her? Haaaaaaaaaaoooooooooooooooowwww? Don't tell me nothing, tell me something.