poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Blooding by Mr Pig.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.31 May 2003

Could you possibly have said anything gayer? If the only thing you can think of to say about this poeme is that it is "beautiful", you shouldn't have said anything at all. You plainly don't even have any idea what you mean when you say "beautiful", except that it's a vague combination of stultifyingly simplistic moralising, facile childhood reminiscence and arbitrary linebreaks.

And if you "don't know those words", how the fuck do you know that "very few words cam describe how beautiful this poem"?