-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.10 Jun 2003

A subtle yet resonant piece. The colourful imagery and bewildering rhyme scheme are reminiscent of some of the later works of Tennyson, and even Chives. The rather pallid references to leukaemia, though somewhat out of place in a poeme about suicide, add a touch of humility that I feel is so badly lacking from contemporary western literature. This reviewer looks forward to anastomosis's next, even riper, comment deletion.

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