Nanshe26 Jun 2003

no, i understood, and feel for you in your grief. only time can replace the cut of expecting to see him come through that door, to hear his voice on the the line...only time will give that peace we all seek at such incontrovertible loss.

but, grief aside, i am addressing the poem's error. forgive me if i seem crass in doing so.

here are the 2 lines with typos:

Presents with *ribions* and ugly bows,
Use that strength *til* the 25th of *Whenevber*

punctuation would help the reader understand where you want pauses, and breaks.

take care of your self, sir. he would want you to.

Namaste.