SupremeDreamer30 Jun 2003

ah, ok ok. I see. btw, i notice some sort of pattern with the first words of each line in your poem:

The
Not
Not
The
Not
He
He
To
Then
He

I suggest thinking of better ways to start your lines.. and to avoid such dull repetition of these words. Dont feel bad, I'm working on not using the word I, so your not alone in learning how to be more creatively flexible with language.