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To be discontinued (Free verse) by impert&ent

I am peeved With the way words eat my mind And spit me out Unfinished

nentwined 5-Sep-03/9:04 AM
cute, though I think "dis" in the title is overkill. And peeved seems a rather... weak feeling, considering.

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