poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Ravens Flight - Voices of Spite (My First Ever Vilanelle) by Don-Quixote.

richa7 Oct 2003

OK mainly flows I think, and some nice material

bit too slow though for the repetition to kick in

gay is too easy a rhyme, and is far more loaded to meaning homosexual, which would mean your feathered foe was singing something like Y.M.C.A.