poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Life/Death (revised) by devotedwonder.

==Doylum1 Aug 2002

Poo/Wee(unrevised)

Poo/

Fart brewing/
Poo slurping/
crap shooting/
shit steaming/
the bowl is filling/
beautiful log to see/

Wee/

bowels filling/
piss steaming/
wee gleaming/
urine burning/
gentials hurting/
what did you put in that tea.