poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on rainfall saga 1 by Bill Z Bub.

god'swife24 Oct 2003

Somethings missing. Something small and important. Why do I want to read

smile
lure(s)
fingers

also, you do not show the thread that binds the smile to the rain and its thundering. You use the word 'weave' but do not. Smile-Fingers-Rain-Thundering. All lured? Some lured by certain ones, and not others? Show me the path, the formula here.