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rainfall saga 1

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Oct 2003 · 8 comments

smile lure fingers fingers rainthunderingrain rain thundering thundering rain rain rain rain rain weave rainfallweave rainfall thundering at last thundering rainfall rainfall at last

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[n/a] Bill Z Bub 23-Oct-03/9:51 PM Reply

Secrets

and puzzles, and
games.

[7] kingit 23-Oct-03/10:07 PM Reply

Hail! Hale! Heyll!

[n/a] EAger to Offend › kingit 24-Oct-03/6:03 AM Reply

You forgot "Heil".

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Oct-03/6:42 AM Reply

Oh my, the locations of instances of 'rain' have similar properties to the locations of actual raindrops. INCREDIBLE!

[n/a] Bill Z Bub › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Oct-03/5:38 PM Reply

Gosh, thanks Mr. Angel! I'm so glad you like this poeme. It was published in Christian Women's Affirmations Monthly. Have you accepted the Lord Jesus into your Heart?

[8] god'swife 24-Oct-03/6:12 PM Reply

Somethings missing. Something small and important. Why do I want to read

smile
lure(s)
fingers

also, you do not show the thread that binds the smile to the rain and its thundering. You use the word 'weave' but do not. Smile-Fingers-Rain-Thundering. All lured? Some lured by certain ones, and not others? Show me the path, the formula here.

[n/a] poetandknowit › god'swife 24-Oct-03/6:21 PM Reply

yeah, like a poem!

[8] god'swife › poetandknowit 24-Oct-03/6:28 PM Reply

precisely.