poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined.

Shuushin13 Nov 2003

an epiphimal transformation, and I don't agree that it feels forced.

The cadence is flawless and that should erase any perceived awkwardness.

Granted, the perspective is a bit... whats the word? 'Commanding'? 'Pretentious' is too strong - whatever; it works fine to my ear.

Rock on.