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ReplyTo a comment on Intersection by INTRANSIT.

SupremeDreamer25 Nov 2003

Hrmm. well, its choppy flow suits it.. but that second gaze.. Perhaps phase? ;/ oi.

Well, I'm known to braze- but today I flicker and smoke. Its very raw stuff, good though; it has room to form itself, and even change colors like a cameleon.

I'll save my vote for now, second and third looks will probly change my outlook on it. much fun to be had with this piece.