richa18 Jan 2004

It is not just about getting it. From the first image of mushrooms I got it. You could have stopped there.

However you carried on and tried to build up a picture which is good. Unfortunately there were too many metaphors pulling the reader about.

Personally I like this and applaud the imagination. But you have to be wary that to get anywhere you will encounter poetry purists who insist on better organisation.

What goad says is correct, and comes from himself spending months being flogged in the eratosphere.