poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Pilgrimage by Christof.

Christof20 Jan 2004

Hmmmm, the 'But'....I know what you mean. Clogs up the metre a bit. Without it, though, I think the statement about the ghost and the shadow is just too stark and not linked to what went before. Dunno. Let me have a ponder. Glad you liked the rest!