zodiac26 Jan 2004
"also, do you think the un-ended clause works?" Sort of. Maybe do away with the period and hope no one notices. If they do, it'll run into 'I loved' pretty nicely. I don't think anyone's being serious here tonight, or I'd turn it over to the crowd for a new 'sweet' - an sweet substitute, if you will. My votes: dreamlike, phatasmagoric, slow-motion... (more to follow)