-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.10 Aug 2002

laughably awful... "The ocean waves do not crash or miss a beat"... what is that supposed to mean? What ocean? Why should ocean waves 'beat'? Is it because 'beat' rhymes with 'feet'? Why should they stop crashing? So what if they do stop crashing? Why do you smell? Is it because you haven't wiped? Is this poeme the 'epitome' of your bum? Why doesn't Jesu feature in any of your poemes? Don't you believe in Jesu? Why not?